Evan, Look at these links below to see ads against drugs.. Notice that they are not clean and happy like your image. They show the ugliness, the repulsiveness, the danger, the risk and the reality of drugs.. You need to step it up and take a stance for it or against it.. As it is right now your image is happy, and more a display for drug paraphernalia than a statement against it's use.. Your image, as it is, feels more like an ad for drugs..or at least a fancy pipe you'd like to sell. Look at these images and see how they reflect a negative view on drugs.. If you truly want to communicate the dangers then you need to show it in your image using color, typography, composition etc.. these tools will help you communicate more clearly. http://motherjones.com/files/legacy/mojoblog/Pri_bathroom.jpg
Evan,
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Notice that they are not clean and happy like your image. They show the ugliness, the repulsiveness, the danger, the risk and the reality of drugs.. You need to step it up and take a stance for it or against it.. As it is right now your image is happy, and more a display for drug paraphernalia than a statement against it's use.. Your image, as it is, feels more like an ad for drugs..or at least a fancy pipe you'd like to sell.
Look at these images and see how they reflect a negative view on drugs.. If you truly want to communicate the dangers then you need to show it in your image using color, typography, composition etc.. these tools will help you communicate more clearly.
http://motherjones.com/files/legacy/mojoblog/Pri_bathroom.jpg
http://www.readplatform.com/uploads/2009/05/antidrug2.jpg
http://www.gawker.com/assets/resources/2007/01/parents.gif
http://flavorwire.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/drugs.jpg
http://adsoftheworld.com/files/GAMEOVER2.jpg
http://www.chilloutpoint.com/images/2009/march/ad_campaigns/best_ad_campaigns26.jpg
http://www.smh.com.au/ffximage/2008/12/11/ice_narrowweb__300x396,0.jpg
http://files.coloribus.com/files/adsarchive/part_369/3692205/file/anti-drug-toilet-small-37300.jpg
^ lol
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